Published February 16, 2010
It is a blissful day ma pal, your natal day,
glitter, shimmer, twinkle, all in a ray.
it is the time to be jubilant, make u smile,
where is the atrocious life? it's away a mile.
See the playing clouds, gaze the jaunty air,
come together, ride them , there is no fare.
forget your seethe, feel yourself my sweetie pie,
nothing is grey, all ravish all very high.
my all endearing wishes are here for you,
a very winsome and happy birthday to you!
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thank u both.its an original poem i wrote it on my friend's birthday.(15 Feb)
Great poem, good use of words and really original.
Good work you have done. Sarah you carried out the feeling in you. my best wishes everytime with you.
GOod luck
Suraj